[CE]

Can You Feel (The Rain)

its raining again
you always said you loved the rain
and now its raining again
i wonder, for a breif moment
where you are
can you still feel the rain ?
do you miss me
like i
miss
you ?

xio

So mysterious...
No one knows him, truly.
Appearing and
dissapearing
over and over
Taking souls as he goes along
his lonley, solitary path
And so again, he dissapears
not uttering
a goodbye


(Jack, you saw that, no?)

[Autumn]

Good poems Morgan. The "xio" one doesn't have any importance to me because I don't know him but the "Can You Feel (The Rain)" does because I can relate to it personally and it's full of good emotions, just right for a poem. Well done..

[Kenji]

Amazing poems Morgan!

I really related your first poem, Can You Feel (The Rain). Damn after having a long week, it was great to finally get home and read some nice poetry. Your second was also cool. It seemed so mysterious and well sad I guess.

It's great to see you write some more poetry...I really hope you write some more. Thanks for making my day :)