[Althalus]

Swimming, rocking, rolling
The Great Orian rides
The sky it's sea
The stars it's guid
To worlds beyond and far
The Great Orian rides

No harm shall take us now
When the Great Orian rides
We will take our time
Through the wideness of wonder
As the Great Orian rides

The ride is always rough
But the journy is never tough
when we ride the Great Orian
To worlds beyond worlds we know
The Great Orian will always go

[Aeris2]

Usually I don't like poems with the title going on throughout the poem, but I actually liked that...it had me lost for a second there. Keep up the good work.