[Althalus]

Filling my mind with complete serenity
I plow my way through the cold storms of my subconscious
Out into a fire-lit sky
Raging flames, licking and biting

I embrace the power
I embrace the filth, the delight
My blood is like lava through my vains

Crushing all in my path, I laugh to myself
But it is the laughter of another
Another from within coming out

The vileness and the greatness
I can not let it go
It has me now
I can not resist

The power within me can never be healed
The power of darkness
I am the power
And all shall bend to my will

I shall rule these lands
It is my pledge
My path
And the shadow eye will see again

[Kie]

Sounds like something a cool evil person would say, like on LOTR or something. It's pretty damn good.

[Autumn]

Heh, good poem Phill. Did you get your inspiration from Lord Of The Rings? It sure sounds like it =D

Keep up the great work! *Applauds* ^_^

[Althalus]

Thank you guys ^_^; I am working on my technique. Trying to make use of words in a more constructive way.

[Aeris2]

You describe how that person is feeling very well, it makes you feel like your there, feeling what he feels. Very good job.