[CE]

I wrote this in the POV of Aeris, when i finished the game. I was so emotional then, so i decided this was perfect.
It was inspired by the Aeris.Cloud pairing so... uh..yea...

Forever Altared

my life was forever altared
the day i saw your face
i knew that you were different
you seemed so out of place

you stuttered when you spoke
your eyes had a special glow
i asked where you were from
you didn't seem to know

but i knew deep inside
there was nothing i could do
my life was forever altared
because i fell in love with you

[Beautifalmaiden]

That's not dumb at all!

I liked it!

[Aeris2]

heh heh yeah I think it's sweet.

[8:59]

That's not a dumb poem, CE. It's good acutally...

[April]

firstly ... gah! ... take pride in your work silly, don't call it dumb!!! It'll help other people admire what you have achieved ...

it's really beautiful and emotional, it scans well with a good rhythm and the rhyming is a nice touch

[Autumn]

Heh, that was a pretty ruley poem CE and it means a lot more after you played FF7. It wasn't full of good emotions though and it seemed a bit too uh, simple to write. No offence...

I'm just saying the truth. Good day CE ^_^ :uh?:

[trevor]

when u think about it its simple,emotional,and in depth all at the same time i liked it.:D :shock:

[The Wandering Knight]

Hey...that's really nice:)...
P.S...compared to what I might write ... it's going to be way too good:p due to that I suck at poetry:lol

[!DMM!]

we do u always say that ur works dumb... MORGY!!!

smart'en up... your better at poetry then I, Drake's pretty good!

anywayz *slaps ce's head* smartin up!

[Kenji]

Good work CE!

A short and sweet poem about a simple love story but it was well written. I bet you could have made a longer, better poem but I wouldn't add or subtract anything from that poem.