[Heavenlyheathen]

You know you waste my time,
racing through my mind,
you're taking me away,
can't anybody save me?

And now I need you,
I need to see you,
get you off my mind.
You see through me,
to the real me
hiding deep inside.

I'm going down in flames,
no part of me remains,
your breath takes me away.
Everytime you cry out,
it makes me want to shout,
can't keep pushing you away.

I reach out to heaven,
something to believe in,
you've taken me away,
chased away what was sacred.

The cold gets to me
when you're through with me,
dancing in my mind.
There's something in you
something that fills me,
can't give up on you now.

I'm going down in flames,
no part of me remains,
your breath takes me away.
Everytime you cry out,
it makes me want to shout,
can't keep pushing you away.

And now it's over,
out in the open.
We'll never be the same.

I'm going down in flames,
no part of me remains,
your breath takes me away.
Everytime you cry out,
it makes me want to shout
can't keep pushing you away.

[yothenavigator]

What's dis?
a linkin park song?
although i like linkin park

[TheGiftedOne]

Wow... That is so beatiful. It makes me want to cry...

[Edmond Dantes]

Emo.

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[Edmond Dantes]

GAHAHA!!!!

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[IDX]

I can make this poem EPIC....if I put some guitars and drums behind it :D!

[Edmond Dantes]

lol epic guitars and drums<3

[IDX]

I think I might just. Man, I still have other projects to do :sad:

....like the Promise cover....

[Edmond Dantes]

i have several projects lined up this summer. build a steampunk bicycle, carve a few canes, sell a few canes, go to my grandparents' house for about a month....

[IDX]

I meant music projects :O

[Edmond Dantes]

i know that man. yours is still a project, just as mine are.

[jewess crabcake]

Everytime you cry out,
it makes me want to shout,


Well, you know you make me wanna'
(Shout!)
Kick my heels up and
(Shout!)
Throw my hands up and
(Shout!)
Throw my head back and
(Shout!)
Come on now
(Shout!)

:neg:

[Edmond Dantes]

lofl

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[COCONUT MILK]

Both sound like fun plans :D

is that you in your sig because if it is you are a retard

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[COCONUT MILK]

you can google for a picture of my boyfriend his name is gok

[COCONUT MILK]

i mean goku sorry for the double post

[Darth Revan]

i mean goku sorry for the double post

There is a reason the 'Edit' button is there, to edit your post so you don't have to make a double post like above. Please use it.

On to topic at hand:

Poetry is ok, if that's the kind of thing you like and enjoy. However, from my own observation, poetry isn't well received here on the Shrine, so OP, be prepared for a lot of negative/flammable feedback.

[IDX]

There is a reason the 'Edit' button is there, to edit your post so you don't have to make a double post like above. Please use it.

On to topic at hand:

Poetry is ok, if that's the kind of thing you like and enjoy. However, from my own observation, poetry isn't well received here on the Shrine, so OP, be prepared for a lot of negative/flammable feedback.

Well, that was writting in 2009 and was finally commented last month. So I'm sure they're in the safe zone.

Unless because of me saying this I blew it. So I'm sorry :(

[Edmond Dantes]

damn your fingers, IDX!

[COCONUT MILK]

oh yeah also everybody that has ever posted something in here sucks at writing

[Darth Revan]

oh yeah also everybody that has ever posted something in here sucks at writing

I write fanfiction. Some I've posted here which have gotten a lot of positive feedback, the rest on Fanfiction.net ( http://www.fanfiction.net ) and Fictionpress.com ( http://www.fictionpress.com ).

Your 'comebacks' are tame and have no basis in fact whatsoever.

[COCONUT MILK]

I am sorry, but I am not impressed that morons on the internet are impressed by your love story between Cloud and his Red Chocobo.

Please come back after you have won the Nobel Peace Price like I have for my work in Dragon Ball study.

[Darth Revan]

I am sorry, but I am not impressed that morons on the internet are impressed by your love story between Cloud and his Red Chocobo.

Please come back after you have won the Nobel Peace Price like I have for my work in Dragon Ball study.

Firstly, I don't write FFVII fanfiction involving beastiality, so sorry that you won't get your hourly 'whack off' material'. I don't write FFVII fanfiction at all.

Secondly, why do you feel the need to insult others? Is it because you are insecure with your own sexuality? That you experience feelings of inadequacy with your right hand? Grow up.

[COCONUT MILK]

I don't think you would make a good phone sex operator. You should probably go to college and become a pioneer.

[Darth Revan]

I don't think you would make a good phone sex operator. You should probably go to college and become a pioneer.

I don't think you or your posts are funny or humorous at all. Your toilet banter is weak, tame and in general offensive.

[Kayfabe]

It's also really easy to just look over and move on to the next post... Replying to his every post with some comment on your belief about his sexuality is consistently making you look easily trollable and like a homophobe.

[COCONUT MILK]

man kayfabe i would go gay for chewey but not you

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[Darth Revan]

It's also really easy to just look over and move on to the next post... Replying to his every post with some comment on your belief about his sexuality is consistently making you look easily trollable and like a homophobe.

It's a known fact that people who generally insult others do so in a vain attempt to make themselves look big and to make up for their own inadequacies. Either that, or they want to have sex with their mother. Ask Sigmund Freud, he more or less proved that.

Troll? Far from it, about 90% of all my posts are to either A: prove a point, B: ask a question, C: offer some insight on the topic in question. It's only been recently since my return from my self imposed hiatus from this forum (Due to personal reasons), and with the influx of noobs and in general jackasses, why should I hold back like I used to? If you don't like what I say either ignore me or report me to a Moderator.

Homophobe? Not really, as far as I'm concerned what others want to do with others is their business. I personally couldn't care less.

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[IDX]

I wouldn't worry about CM. I don't think he takes ANYTHING seriously. Which includes his own posts and everyone elses.

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[deasfet]

Deep real deep lol

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[sillyme]

It also makes me want to cry. But not in a good way.