[The_Chocobo_Knight]

RATED R!






What Lust Can Do To A Man

a hip young girl
I saw last week
in tight blue jeans
and matching tee

is naked now
in front of me
spent of all her
energy.

a smile plays across
my face,
for something beautiful
just took place


a week ago
I saw her there
and kidnapped her,
fucked her,
starved her,
killed her.
Fucked her;
now here we
are naked, alone
and embraced
closer then two
spoons stacked.

and i kiss her
softly
and a smile
plays across
my face.




(you love it)

[Sobye]

You frighten me.

[Nightowl9910]

Same here!

[The_Chocobo_Knight]

boo

[Ceidwad]

You make Olde seem moderate. :(

[jewess crabcake]

dude seek help.

[The_Chocobo_Knight]

it poetry, not reality. everyone calm down. read some bukowski and maybe you'll understand.

[jewess crabcake]

I know but still.

[The_Chocobo_Knight]

haha

well, it got the reaction I suppose I should have anticipated. You should have seen the looks on the faces in my creative writing class.

[Prak]

Am I the only one who thinks this is a work of sheer brilliance?

[April]

I vote The Chocobo Knight as the official FFShrine Poet Laureate, that was amazing.

[The_Chocobo_Knight]

ha, thanks guys. there's more. and it's crazier.

[Destai]

am i the only one who can take a blatant joke? thats pretty funny.

[shakespeare]

um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
but hey, what ever works,
very interesting.

[Destai]

yes its the height of ignorance to rape someone "after" killing them. some people just make me sick!

[PrinceKheldar]

dead chicks dont say no.

[Sobye]

um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
but hey, what ever works,
very interesting.

Oh my God, the ignorance.

[beat]

Gotta watch out for those Chocobo Knights.

[TM]

whoa, thats hardcore.

[cawnil]

that was an intelligent poem. you captured the essence of lust perfectly.

[Bean_Cup!]

That's hawt...

[Dysfunction]

Prak is right. I love Prak.

[からの馬鹿]

That's wow.

[TM]

You have the best name eva.