Riana
03-03-2002, 05:24 PM
Hi, I would like to share a poem with all of you. It was one of my first. Please tell me what you all think of it.
Here goes...

Searching...

The sun rises, the sun sets.
The stars come, the stars go.
How many more sleepless nights must I bear?
Before the hole in my soul is filled.

Seeing the world hand in hand.
When will my time come?
Waiting for you seems so long.
Each day brings me closer to you.

Looking for you is like,
Looking for the lost treasures of forgotten time.
To prove my love, I would do anything.
Give you the sun, moon and stars.

I want to take you beyond this rock.
Where we are is a world of dreams.
That never sleeps, nor stirs.
There you are, there I am, and no one else.

Why am I here? Alone......isolated.
The pain......the heartache.
Only you can find me.
Only you can save me.

SSJ
03-04-2002, 12:56 AM
thats great. Sounds great, the words go well together. Keep up the great poems!:)

Bahamut ZERO
03-04-2002, 08:56 AM
I liked it. It reminds me of certain parts of my life, and carries a very strong feeling over. Well done, keep up the good work.

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