[Marceline]

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<font face="verdana" size="-1" color="#000000">Bouncy or coffy
it's all the same at the bottom of the river
Nobody minds
Nobody cares
it's pathetic
that's what
it is</font>

[rezo]

Heh. I like it. The end in particular... seems like something he would say.


Maybe it's because he actually says it and I just don't remember =\

edit: Most of the goths I knew in highschool never made the depressing poetry nor did other such stuff. One did, but the others just made fun of him =|

[Marceline]

we can't all
and some of us
don't
that's all there is
you can give a donkey
a happy ending
but the miserable beginning
remains forever

[Riana]

Though the concept is amusing, the content is not.

That's some nice work~

[mrmonkeyman]

I've said it once and I'll say it again.
Caesura aint a roman Emperor.
You're using it to sound more poetic, and yet it just feels wrong. Out of place.

[Marceline]

Originally posted by mrmonkeyman
I've said it once and I'll say it again.
Caesura aint a roman Emperor.
You're using it to sound more poetic, and yet it just feels wrong. Out of place.

Actually, this isn't serious poetry at all.

All I'm essentially doing is taking quotes from old Winne the Pooh Books, and turning them into half assed gothic poems.

I'll pass the message along though.

[mrmonkeyman]

To who?
Winnie himself?

Had I known that they were quotes from the books, then I'd've treated it like so!

Fair enough, funny then.

[pedo mc tax me softly, black person (whom i love)]

You mean you voluntarily read that garbage, Ndi?

My god, that's just sick!

[rezo]

Originally posted by Odin
You mean you voluntarily read that garbage, Ndi?

I hope you're joking when you call it garage.


Maybe it's because he actually says it and I just don't remember =\

Looks like this was the case =|

[Ross]

It's good. But I like peotry when it rhymes...I just sounds better, and (for me) I can feel the words alot better.

[TK]

Originally posted by Odin
You mean you voluntarily read that garbage, Ndi?

My god, that's just sick!

This is all the explanation we need for Odin's lack of a sense of humor. =\

[pedo mc tax me softly, black person (whom i love)]

Originally posted by rezo


I hope you're joking when you call it garage.



Looks like this was the case =|

lol, "garage" rezo?

And no, I wasn't. I couldn't stand Winnie the Pooh even when I was the age where most kids watched the junk.

[TK]

The Winnie the Pooh cartoon was quite OBVIOUSLY crap.

The Winnie the Pooh book is quite obviously NOT.

You are a terrible person. =(

[Marceline]

This
writing buisness
Pencils
and what-not
overrated
if you ask me
silly stuff
nothing
in it

[rezo]

Best one yet.